I wasn't a fan of my OGR Part 2 composition, and I know I don't have the most time but I came up with this. I think in terms of composition it's better than my last one, can this get the green light? @Phil
Compositionally, this is much more exciting. Just make sure you get into the detailing of some of those buildings in the foreground/midground so they can move beyond being 'smooth blobs' - just think about their construction and their materiality, otherwise you'll risk them looking as if 'Maya made them'...
Compositionally, this is much more exciting. Just make sure you get into the detailing of some of those buildings in the foreground/midground so they can move beyond being 'smooth blobs' - just think about their construction and their materiality, otherwise you'll risk them looking as if 'Maya made them'...
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